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Drops of water...
« on: June 20, 2004, 12:05:38 PM »
This is a little something I thought up while taking a shower and wrote shortly thereafter. An interesting bit of social commentary if I do say so myself- makes you think.



When you take a shower do you ever watch the little drops of  water stream down the wall, looking at the little paths they take and the other little drops they meet, until they take that dive into the thin layer of water covering the floor because the drain hasn’t sucked it up yet? It’s like a soap opera, wondering what’s going to happen next, whether that drop right there is going to meet its end or is it going to swerve at the last moment. Did it ever occur to you how pertinent that really is? How much it can be applied to us? How closely we’re represented by these seemingly insignificant amorphous blobs of liquid? The shower head shoots water out of the wall, thus signifying the creation of lives and people. As the water hits the wall it forms into a droplet- this is our birth, the droplet ourselves, the wall and the path we take on it our life. Some drops of water race down the wall, trying desperately to be the first to be dashed upon the hard plastic floor below. Others cling to the wall, refusing to let go until they’re forced to. And as we meander our way down the wall, we come upon other drops of water and we combine with them. These other drops are the people we meet in life, and the combination represents the fusing of those two lives- forever you will always be linked. It redefines who you are; no longer are you your own entity, or even wholly your own identity. It doesn’t matter if you don’t like the person, it doesn’t matter if you do like the person, they will always remain a part of you, and you apart of them, and there’s nothing you can do to change that. You are forever altered by the people you meet, be they friends, parents, siblings, anyone. They leave an imprint on you, and regardless of whether or not you desire it, they are now a part of you- you’re a little bit of them, never completely yourself. Our personas are in actuality mere combinations, mixtures if you will, of the people we interact with. When you meet someone new you’re never the person you were before you met them. You incorporate some of them into you, whether you want to or not, and there’s nothing you can do about it. Once a drop of water has combined with another drop of water, they never split, ever. They also pick up speed on their path down the wall, rarely forging new paths, nearly always following the trails of their predecessors- as you know, water always takes the path of least resistance. So as we go through life we generally follow water’s example and take the path of least resistance. We go where we know is safe, where we know we can succeed- the chance of failure is frightening. Seldom is it that we choose to go our own way, make our own decisions. We’re given the illusion of free will in life, but in reality we’re being herded into simply navigating the beaten path. We think we’re choosing the course to our own life, but we’re just playing a big game of follow the leader. As a drop of water combines and recombines with other drops, it becomes bigger and bigger. As it becomes bigger it’s more likely to follow the watery streams of its ancestors, but it is also more likely to succeed should it attempt to break off into the unknown. Its sheer weight and mass give it the ability to create its own stream, but most often it chooses not to and follows the predestined course. As more and more people are added to your life it becomes easier to slip into the role of a sheep and to never do the leading yourself. It becomes easier to lose track of yourself, indeed, to lose your identity altogether. Despite the fact that your persona and your identity are redefined every time you meet someone, that doesn’t change that fact that it’s still who you are. You’ll always be yourself, even if your self is made up of bits and pieces of other selves. Only when you realize that, only when the large drop of water learns of its size, can you truly be your be your own person, truly make your own decisions, and truly trod untrodden ground. And inevitably we will all make that leap into the pool of water at the bottom, only to be sucked into the drain, filtered, and shot back out of the wall as someone else. Such is the endless course of life.    
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RE: Drops of water...
« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2004, 12:13:28 PM »
Ooooo...Someone has awakened...  

Hehe...But that's a pretty good description...well-thought out...Let me add this: bigger drops reach the bottom first, and as smaller drops become bigger, they speed up...So you could say that as one comes into contact with others' views(the smaller drops becoming bigger as it comes in contact with other small drops) and absorbs them, they are only speeding up their demise...Or perhaps that's just my personal philosophy on other's opinions...
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RE: Drops of water...
« Reply #2 on: June 20, 2004, 01:20:26 PM »
So where does that leave those who actively try to stay away from others? Soap scum?

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RE: Drops of water...
« Reply #3 on: June 20, 2004, 01:49:15 PM »
Well that's not possible. You can't completely avoid people. You will run into people. But I'm not at all surprised to see such deep thoughts from mouse. Very impressive. This sounds like a topic that needs a poem written about it. I am no poet so I won't ruin mouse's thoughts by trying to poemetize them.
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RE: Drops of water...
« Reply #4 on: June 20, 2004, 02:19:01 PM »
i do that too mouse..i look at the water that drips down the side of my shower mall. You made a very good example of the comparison with that and causality and free will. What you wrote was art, and it should be printed in a book somewhere.  Damn mouse..just think your so young, your quite prolific in your young age. When your older...wow. Good work mouse.
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RE: Drops of water...
« Reply #5 on: June 20, 2004, 02:31:53 PM »
Well written. =D

Makes me sad, since the best thing I ever wrote can be found in the "KnowsNothing's Short Story" thread right here in PGC's very own forums. =(  If I ever have to write a metaphorical poem for school or something I'll base it off of that, k?

I mostly agree with it, too.  Except for what Bill added, I don't like that bit..

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« Reply #6 on: June 20, 2004, 02:39:12 PM »
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this has a bit of religious bits so i can't post it in the forum..i can link to it
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RE:Drops of water...
« Reply #7 on: June 20, 2004, 04:19:05 PM »
I wouldn't say it is impossible to avoid society, as  it can easily be done if you want.  There have been many cases of Japanese men being found on remote islands well into the 1970s who have not seen anyone for nearly 30 years.  They were in the belief that the war was still going on, and that they must remain there to maintane their duty.

However, I think there is a point where men who do go into avoidence of society are no longer truely human.  Many of you are familiar with the idea of consiousness and subconsiousness, and to me that is what seperates humanity from animals.  We are able to act on both of these two powers in our mind, not only the will to survive, but to rational that survival, even if it is only an attempt to disguise the truth (we are alive to reproduce).  However, when someone spends an extended time away from others, they tend to show the first signs of a devolution of their consious thought.  People tend to just stop thinking about what they are doing and do it.

This is actually very familiar to anyone who has read or scene stuff about war.  What is called the 1000 mile stare is where people usually lose their consiousness, where they have simply overloaded their mind to the point where the subconsious is the only part left functioning in the person.  These people often become detached, don't talk, and suffer from horrible nightmares.  The nightmares are usually the last lingering affects of their consious thought trying to rationalize what they had subconsiouly done.  

What I am trying to get at is if we consider ourselves as waterdrops going down a wall, we will inevitably form into bigger parts as mouse said, but there are people who who just don't interact, they are just no longer normal people.  These would be what I called the soap scum, because they are often imobile in attachment, they no longer care, they no longer interact, they are just there.  Also these people tend to be dangerous, not only to themselves, but to others.  I would not nessisarily call them interacting because they kill other people, as they often do not see people as people.  They see only a competitor, be it for life, or any other primal instinct they may have.  They often feed off the idea that they are surviving, and use this as an extension to destroy others, or in this case water drops.  However, when someone has entered into this primal state, they are often capable of causing it in others, as when someone becomes very, very subdued and knows what they are doing, they are in many cultures considered wise.  Take for example in apocolypse now, where the crazy green beret guy, who had literally killed hundreds of people for often no reason, had caused many other people to fall under the same primal state.  

However, those who followed him, however unconsious they looked, were consious to stay within his graces, which showed that they were in some way, still consious beings.  Eventually, many people who enter this state will progress into the same state as their "leader", and will often kill as meaninglessly, for their own being.

You can argue that they could be killing to strike fear into others, but in many cases, that killing does not produce the same long term effects that the water drops combining would do.  In this case the fear is usually temporary, and will not effect someone eternally.

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RE:Drops of water...
« Reply #8 on: June 20, 2004, 06:04:25 PM »
Owww, I can't even bring myself to read that. Stupid post-exam brain drain.

*tries reading again and brain explodes*

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RE:Drops of water...
« Reply #9 on: June 20, 2004, 06:47:26 PM »
Well, at least people approve of what you do in the shower..........

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« Reply #10 on: June 20, 2004, 07:23:34 PM »
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Originally posted by: Shifty
Owww, I can't even bring myself to read that. Stupid post-exam brain drain.

*tries reading again and brain explodes*


heh.  I'm just glad I'm not the only one.  Paragraphs that long REALLY scare me, and I was somehow only able to read about a third of it.  I guess philosophy just isn't for me.  
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RE:Drops of water...
« Reply #11 on: June 20, 2004, 07:38:03 PM »
Yeah, people always harp on me for my lack of paragraphing, but it just doesn't come naturally to me. Besides, this is one instance where it really is just one big paragraph.

Anyway, I'm glad you guys liked it.
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RE: Drops of water...
« Reply #12 on: June 20, 2004, 07:58:43 PM »
lol your gonna need to leanr some pragraphin skills if you wanna go to teh college.
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« Reply #13 on: June 21, 2004, 07:53:31 AM »
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Originally posted by: Shifty
Owww, I can't even bring myself to read that. Stupid post-exam brain drain.

*tries reading again and brain explodes*


heh.  I'm just glad I'm not the only one.  Paragraphs that long REALLY scare me, and I was somehow only able to read about a third of it.  I guess philosophy just isn't for me.  


Me neither.  I didn't read Perm's either.  Sorry

Wow, MC, that was deeeep.  So you were just taking a shower and thought of this stuff? I'm just surprised that I took the time to read it.  I think I skipped a few of the last lines though.
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RE: Drops of water...
« Reply #14 on: June 21, 2004, 05:43:01 PM »
Well mouse, it it makes you (and manunited) feel any better, I read it all. ^_^ Jeez, you kids. You need to READ more! All that TV has rotted your brains!
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RE:Drops of water...
« Reply #15 on: June 24, 2004, 05:44:32 AM »
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« Reply #16 on: June 24, 2004, 09:44:47 AM »
I read it. . . very interesting.  I do the same, watching the water drops, but I don't think I ever interpreted it as a metaphor for life.

I don't recall you mentioning that every water droplet leaves behind a small trail of water as well, which exist until they dry up or are picked up by another water droplet.
Anyway, very good metaphor for general social existence.  It lacks some explanation as any metaphor does, but it's pretty all encompassing, as far as that philosophy goes.

What do I like to do in the shower?  It's not philosophical, really, at least not in a traditional sense.  I like to just stand there and try to consciously feel every drop of water hitting my body and running down my skin.  Every one.  It's a really cool feeling, if you bother to acknowledge it.  Try it sometime.
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