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Offline BadBreathBear

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Can you read something for me and give me feedback?
« on: October 02, 2003, 04:18:40 PM »
I have a screenplay that needs to be proofed. Can you help? Thanks.
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Offline KnowsNothing

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RE: Can you read something for me and give me feedback?
« Reply #1 on: October 02, 2003, 04:25:02 PM »
ME.  HELP.  NOW.  email me at rudshouse@hotmail.com and please leave a message after the beep.

EDIT:  Or better yet, do what Ninja said.
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Offline Grey Ninja

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RE: Can you read something for me and give me feedback?
« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2003, 04:53:55 PM »
Depends on two things for me.  I am very good with english, forgive me, but my free time is limited, and I have not read a book in at least 5 years.  I am not about to start now for someone I barely know.  I will provide my feedback for you based on two conditions.

1)  length (guideline: no longer than 25 pages)
2)  subject matter interests me within 3 pages.

I would prefer not being emailed it.  Hosting a zip with it in it, and emailing the link would be prefered, if you are shy.  (ninjacommander@hotmail.com)

Please disregard any spelling or grammatical errors in this post.  I have had a lot to drink tonight, as I can finally afford to be an alcoholic.  
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Offline Jdub03

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RE: Can you read something for me and give me feedback?
« Reply #3 on: October 04, 2003, 04:54:30 AM »
Every post grey ninja is drunk.  Maybe we need to do an intervention or something
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Offline PIAC

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RE: Can you read something for me and give me feedback?
« Reply #4 on: October 04, 2003, 05:52:28 AM »
or get him more beer to celebrate his new job

im up for my suggestion
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Offline Jdub03

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RE: Can you read something for me and give me feedback?
« Reply #5 on: October 04, 2003, 06:26:31 AM »
Okay more beer sounds good!!
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