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Offline ThePerm

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Creative writing I
« on: April 21, 2006, 07:27:29 PM »
Ok here is the game; basically you make up a story. You take the person who posted above you and you make the story about you and them. Each post will have a different scenario and setup. It is ok to return with previous setups. This is an exercise in creative writing.

Ok. Since no one posted above me. I will use KnowsNothing because he kicks my ass in Mario kart (I had the most fun playing with him so far)

Scenario: Zombie attack

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I have this friend who works at a Circle K. Since none of you know him. I will insert KnowsNothing in his place.

KnowsNothing, who is one of my very best friends works at the Circle K. One day I was really bored and I decided to visit him while he was on his shift. I went to buy a soda. He was like "that’s ok, however one day I will need a favor" This of course made us best friends. So, another day I went to the Circle K to get some free soda and some hotdogs (this is one of those early closing Circle Ks, hotdogs are thrown away at 8 and usually fed to bums). So I come in there and we start talking about all sorts of random things, every few minutes momentarily being interrupted by customers. We usually talk about things like what music we like, our favorite movies, politics, religion, and video games. Just things that are really fun to talk about.

So were there for about three hours talking when all of a sudden we hear some noise outside. At the gas pump there is someone pumping gas when all of a sudden some strange bum attacks them. This had to be the weirdest bums we ever saw (allot of bums hang out around convenience stores) He was really skinny. Skinnier then most bums (who ironically are fat allot of the time..all they do is drink and sit on their ass all day)
So anyways, this bum bit the ear off of the guy at the pump. He was just some college student. He runs in and yells "WHAT THE F@%K!! We immediately call the cops. The bum is still out there, but he hasn't came in the store. We were concerned.

At the same time we were really hungry. We decide to order some pizza. This place called Rocka-pizza. I ordered over the phone. I asked for one pizza that has pepperoni and mushroom. We were limited on funds at the time. Having only 14 dollars between us. Anyways we call them and it takes an hour for them to get to the store. The guy brings two pizzas. One mushroom and one pepperoni. We were like..."um...we only ordered one pizza". Either way we took the pepperoni pizza and paid the bill. So were enjoying the pizza when the pizza guy comes in again. He tells us he called his manager, and apparently they would just throw the pizza away when he returned back to the pizza place. He tells us because they messed up our order that the second pizza is on us. Which is totally kickass because they are some pretty good-sized pizzas. Were like kickass! We offer him a slice, but he declines and takes off.

So were enjoying our pizza and a few costumers come in. I continue to eat some pizza and KnowsNothing takes some customers. The police arrive, but the bum walked off. We told them what happened and they said we might have to appear at court if they find the bum. We were a little bummed being witnesses, because court can be so boring. The college student who had his ear bitten off, they said had gone to the hospital on his own, but they said he got strangely sick afterwards. They left and we both had our last slices of pizza.

We listen to some Zeppelin on the Radio and then KnowsNothing begins to mop. At this particular store there is security guard (Logan) who comes in around closing. He is pretty cool. He is around 40, but looks like he is in his 20s just because he's had such good conditioning for so many years. He has had a real depressing life lately. His wife left him, the kids not really his, he just got kicked out of his house by his roommates who bought it out from underneath him. Really crappy stuff. Nonetheless. He has some relationships with some pretty hot chicks, and it looks like things are moving forward with him. Every once in a while he, KnowsNothing and me go to bar and hang out. So we know him pretty well.

I was sitting on the counter, and in his cop voice (he's an ex cop) he's like "do you know your violating code 132 dash 24"...or something. It was pretty funny. So were sitting there and we are about to close. There are these two straggler customers. They come in even though we know we're going to close in like 5 minutes. Of course the only thing they probably want are one of three things. Beer, cigarettes, or lottery tickets. 3 vices here. Anyways were just chilling and then the bum walks in. He grabs one of the customers and drags him into the beer freezer. We are like WTF. Logan goes into the beer freezer slowly holding his gun up. Then the bum rushes towards him all crazy like. Logan shoots. We see the bum and he got shot in the head.

KnowsNothing and I look in the freezer and see what Logan saw just seconds before he shot. The customer who got pulled in the freezer has his arms ripped off and his face is missing. At about this time the radio cuts off and there is a message.

BEWARE; TONIGHT WE HAVE HAD REPORTS OF SEVERAL ATTACKS AND RIOTING. IF YOU SEE ANYBODY WHO IS ACTING UNUSUAL BE CAUTIOUS. STAY TUNED, MORE ALERTS WILL BE BROADCASTED. REMAIN WHERE YOU ARE. DO NOT GO OUTSIDE. WHEREVER YOU ARE, LOCK THE DOORS.

On the circle K there is a switch, it looks a lot like your normal light switch, but isn’t. Anyways. What it does is makes the metal gate go down, and thus locking us inside. When I visit KnowsNothing at work I usually stay till closing. I’ve seen the gate go down a few times. Sometimes when we know a few stragglers might come in last minute we close the gate just a little bit over the glass door so they get the idea that the Circle K is closed. Sometimes it doesn’t work and people bang on the door. Then we have to tell them that we are closed. Then they look at amazement at me when they see me sitting there with a Dr. Pepper eating a hotdog and laughing at it.

So we close the gate down so no on can come in. KnowsNothing says, “It seems as though we might be getting off a little later then usual tonight.” Logan was like “what was all of that about”. The other customer, who is a regular named Fred says “so I have to stay here for the rest of the night?”. Logan says, “well that all depends.” “we’ll have to listen to the radio” Fred, who is a stoner, and quite resembles a younger Bob Ross. He then looks in the freezer and says “oh”

This particular circle K is surprisingly well fortified. There is a window, but in front of the window is a mesh and some bars. So no one could break in. It’s made out of brick. We are quite safe where we are. Or so we think at the time.

UPDATE. WE RECEIVING MOREAND MORE REPORTS OF VIOLENCE TONIGHT. POLICE SAY A BEWILDERED HOMELESS PERSON ATTACKED A COLLEGE STUDENT AND BIT HIS EAR OFF. THE COLLEGE STUDENT REPORTED TO THE HOSPITAL BUT WITHIN 20 MINUTES OF ARRIVING BECAME VERY ILL. LATER HE GREW VIOLENT AND ATTACKED OTHER PATIENTS AND DOCTORS. POLICE BELIEVE THAT THE MASS VIOLENCE AND THIS SICKNESS ARE TIED TOGETHER.

So, I go to grab a soda from the fountain and gulp it up. It is pretty good. We a start discussion about what we should do with the bodies. We agree that they should be kept in the freezer for the time being.

An hour passes.

UPDATE, DOCTORS HAVE EXAMINED ONE OF THE VICTIMS OF THE SICKNESS.

Anyways, that’s all for now. Again you can continue this setup, or move onto another, but you have to create a tag-team story with the poster above.
 
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RE: What IF
« Reply #1 on: April 21, 2006, 09:28:13 PM »
Sitting at his house on the hill overlooking the city, I look out upon circle K.  I think to myself that my plan is finally coming to fruition.  The virus that I engineered to change basic human instincts is working.

The virus is made to program people to spread the affliction as much as they can, except to me.  then half of the zombies flock to the circle K, while the others surround my house to protect me.

Of course their is a reason to this madness, those damn people there, KnowsNothing, and thePerm.  I hate them all so much.  Once years ago, I was making my way home and I went to the circle K just as that damn gate started to close.  They only closed it part way so that the door wouldnt open, that damn KnowsNothing wouldnt let me in, even though the place wouldnt close for another 5 WHOLE SECONDS!!!!  Then, of all the nerve, The perm sat their, eating his hot dog, and drinking his soda, and he LAUGHED AT ME!!!!  All I wanted that night was some beer, cigarettes and my lottery tickets but instead, I got humiliation.  Then in a twist of fate, the numbers I always use for my lottery tickets were called that night, but I didnt play because THE CIRCLE K WAS CLOSED, then if that werent bad enouph, I couldnt drown my rage with booze and cigarrettes like I always do, because THE CIRCLE K WAS CLOSED.

Ever since, I've been plotting to get my revenge on KnowsNothing for closing that full 5 seconds early, and at thePerm for lauphing at me, and I made this virus by mixing household cleaning products together.  Tonight I chose to reign my virus onto the town, and once enouph people were my slaves, they would raid the circle K, take all of the beer, cigarretes, and lotto tickets to me.  They would also kill those two who denied me what I wanted so long ago.  REVENGE WOULD BE MINE MWAH HA HA HA HAAAAAAAA *cough cough* HA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!



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« Reply #2 on: April 22, 2006, 05:14:41 PM »
So I was sitting in my room watching Confessions of a teanage Drama Qeueen and I noticed that there was somthing wierd going on down at the Circle K. So I called up my homies from the barrio and we went over to jack these fools who were flocking around the store. Then we noticed they was friggin zombiees, so I took out my A-K and started blasting them sukkas all over the place. Then my home boy Izzy discovered that the leader was some fool who we only knew as Zach, and we stormed his house to put an end to his crazy mad sientist ways. Then we burned down his house and called up our vudu dr friend and reserected Perm and Knows Nothing cuz they were just innocent victoms.




Circel K is a chain of convienence stores that were local to Twin Falls Idaho (or just Idaho in general? they were nation wide anyways) and were all bought out by Shell a couple years ago, and NO LONGER EXIST  
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RE:What IF
« Reply #3 on: April 24, 2006, 07:35:40 AM »
circle k's are prevalent here, also, they were prevalent when i lived in georgia....


anyways next situation : your trapped in the middle ages. you have guns, samurai swords, motorcycles, a jeep, and science books.
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« Reply #4 on: April 24, 2006, 07:48:30 AM »
meanwhile in a suburb not too far from NYC:

a boy named Mike was staying up late into the night posting random messages on a video game site. going by the monicher the EasyCure, he posted and posted just to fight off his sleep. why he would fight it was beyond even him. as he searched for newer and stranger topics to discuss and add his two cents in, he came across a news story about zombies attacking a circle k. being curious mike headed out to his local conveniance store, the 7-11. This is his story...

It was almost three in the morning as i pulled up into the driveway of the 7-11 and i was relieved to see it was still open. I had heard of some sort of zombie attacking my forum friends from PGC at a circle k and wanted to make sure nothing was happening in my town. i walk in to the conveniance store and take alook around, everything looked right but there was something in the air..something you could feel. That's when it struck me, there were no employees in the store, nor were there police officers who take a break from their beat to get a snack. Donuts...ha, so cliche. I became cautious as i proceeded to walk in, making my way to the slushy machine. I was going to treat myself to a nice cold drink while no one was around.
Reaching the machine i grab a jump cup and hold it in front of the nozzle. There was an odd sound coming from it, then my cherry coke started to spew forth, only to pause and sputter out. I dropped my cup; blood was coming out from the machine, not iced soft drink. I stood there terrified for a moment, when i felt something hit the tip of my nose. I looked up...there was a hand sticking out of the top of the machine, it was bleeding. i backed off and almost spilt burning hot coffee all overmyself. I was afraid, I'll admit it, but i wasn't going to run away.
Invastigating the 7-11 some more i came across a door marked "employees only." It was open a crack. I walked closer to it slowly from the side, not about to open it but instead peering in thru the crack. I heard a dripping noise. it was so hard to see inside because the angle i peer in thru only shown a stack of backstocked condiments and a few papers, but on the floor i could see a small pool of blood. i change angles to peer in more and see a body of a dead cop on the floor, blood still trickling from its wounds. i gasped slightly and retreated against the wall. I think i was heard. i hid behind the stands and slowly walked towards the exit as the Employee door opened. from my hiding place all i could see was the door open and close, not the man or thing who mudered the officer on the floor. when the door closed i knew it was my chance to leave.
I wasnt about to give up yet. while peering in the doorway i noticed there was a smile window that peered into the room, so i made my way around the 7-11 to the back and found the window. i had to climp up a bit to see inside, thats when i saw...it.
It wasnt a man nor a beast but a demonic mix of both. something only evil could of created. it sat there next to the officers lifeless body, blood dripping from its teeth and hands. it was watching something, a small tv perhaps. the window was too small to tell. i noticed a TEEN magazine on a desk just barely visible behind the horrific demon, Lindsay Lohan was ont he cover...i had an idea!
Remembering that PGC and an official  Lindsay Lohan fan i drove back home to rush to my desktop and let everyone know what was going on. I messaged Animecyberrat only to find out that he had just smoked a bunch of those demons spawn in his town, even took out the person who created them and used a vudu doctor to resarect fellow PGC users ThePerm and KnowsNothing. Doing what we do best, we created a thread on PGC to warn everyone that the emergency wasnt over, zombies were still attacking conveniance stores everywhere, not just Circle K's. there was some peice of the puzzle we were missing. Simply storming into Zachs residence and killing him with a few 'homies from the barrio' wasn't going to cut it. we had to find a way to stop these zombies from attacking our conveniance stores.
Now with thePerm and Knowsnothing back from the dead, and Animecyberrat and his love for lindsay lohan, we needed to find away to stop this once and for all. Where else would Animecyberrat buy his magazines and news papers filled with news and pictures of lindsay lohan from if all circle k's and 7-11s were overrun by blood thirsty zombies? Where would ThePerm and Knowsnothing hang out at after closing and have free hotdogs?? something had to be done. But what...
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RE:What IF
« Reply #5 on: April 24, 2006, 05:49:59 PM »
well I thought they were all bought out by Shell, maybe that was just theones in Idaho. I never seena circle K anywhere else so I figured they were all local.  
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« Reply #6 on: April 25, 2006, 04:08:52 PM »
i got good beef jerkey from one in FL about a year ago (im tlaking about a circle k that is)
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« Reply #7 on: April 25, 2006, 08:37:21 PM »
well that explains it, Ive never seen one in MD.  So anybody wanna get back to the stories?
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« Reply #8 on: April 26, 2006, 10:05:34 AM »
not yet, lets wait till a dark and stormy night.
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« Reply #9 on: April 26, 2006, 01:47:40 PM »
It was a dark and stormie night, and Zach was sitting in his living room watching Mean Girls and fantasizing about the lead character when all of a sudden the power goes out...
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« Reply #10 on: April 26, 2006, 02:28:28 PM »
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It was a dark and stormie night, and Zach was sitting in his living room watching Mean Girls and fantasizing about the lead character when all of a sudden the power goes out...
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« Reply #11 on: April 26, 2006, 04:16:21 PM »
I sit there, and I carefully zip up my fly.  Why the heck would the power go out? I ask myself.  I decide to go investigate I walk outside, and I look around.  Because of the storm, a car has careened into the power line, and the lines are down all around it.  Amazingly the driver is lyndsay lohan, who crashed her car again (burn).  I manage to save her by lassoing her car's bumper, then towing her car to safety.  Out of gratitude for my heroic acts, she comes into my house where I call up The Rat just to tell him, that I have lyndsey lohan in my house, and have sealed up all of the doors and windows so he cant come in.  Also, should he try to make it inside, I have my shotgun ready. (revenge for killing me in the last story)  
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« Reply #12 on: April 26, 2006, 04:22:40 PM »
I wrote this before Zachs post but he posted before I could so not fair. This is continued from what I wrote above.



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Zach gets up and starts cussing at the tv for goiong out and runns over to check his fuse box to see if he can get power back. Suddenly he hears a noise coming from out side, its a soft scrapping noise. He thinks nothing of it at first but then he remebers all those late nite horror movies he watches and then starts to creep himself out.


He hears the noise again, it sounds like a cat or other small animal clawing the siding of his house out side on the front porch. So he decided to check it out. grabbing a flash light and his sling shot he heads for the door. The noise grows louder as he approaches the door. Thining to hisself Zach wonders, "what could be making that noise? It can't be the neigbors cat because i ran him over with the lawnmower this morning."


He reaches the door and opens it up, ever so slowly. Flashing the light out first to get a glimps of what is out there he peak through the door to see that there is nothing there. He looks puzzled as he steps out onto the porch and begins examining the area. Sure enough he goes over to where h heard tho noise and he now sees claw marks on the wall right below the living room window. "whoa, this is way too creepy for me, I'm goiong back inside." he wispers silently as he turns to go back in side. Once safely inside there is a flash of lightning and just then the power comes back on.


Zach shrugs it off and truns his Tv back on to finish watching his movie. So he sits down on his recliner and something wierd happens, instead of playing his favorite Lindsay Lohan flick, the Tv screan is now all full of static and he hears a faint sound voice calling from inside the television set. Now at first he thinks he must be iagining things there nothing coming from the tv. "no," he says out loud, "it's the storm I just lost my station thats all. It will come back in a minute.



Just then the Tv turns itself off and now Zach is sweating with fear. he hears the scratching again only this time it is coming form the kitchen. "Who's there?" he asks. Zach panics and runs to the kitchen as fast as he can an flicks the light switch on. He looks around the room and finds nothing. this is causing him to become even more scared so he then begins to head up the stairs to his bedroom when he sees something behind the couch.

He creeps up to the couch thining to himself that whatever it is he is not going to be scared. He is just about there when he hears running water coming from up stairs in the bathrrom sink. He turns around and stops for a second. He is torn betwwen going upstairs to see who turned on the water and seeing how is behind the couch. He tells himself that he has to see whats behind the couch first. So he begins to approach the couch again and this time as he gets righ up on it he hears the scratching coming from the kitchen again. Sweat is pouring down his face as fear grabs ahold of his spne and begins creeping up his back.

Slowloy Zach pushes all his irrational fears aside and heads for to the couch and just as he is climbing up on it to see who is there he hears a cat-like scream coming from behind, he turns around quickly and screams with fears as the dead cat lays on the floor staring up at him.  The cat's eyes looking at him, peircing his soul, thoughts of killing the animal running throug his head. "no, this can't be its impossible!" he shouts. All that was left of the animal was its severed head, blood stains on its fur and brains seeping out its neck. Zach stumbles ouver the couch as he tries to geta way form the beast who has comeback from the dead. All of a sudden head starts bobbing forward and he stumbles over the couch trying to escape it.

Zach stumbles completly over the couch and lands on the back side, rigth on top of his buddy, Ice Cold. Zach screamed as he scramble to his feat and just then he looked down to see Ice Cold had a small string tied aroudn his writs. Laughing histericaly Icy got up and pulled the string that had the cats ear tied to the other end. At that same moment his next door neigbor and close friend, the rat, walked into the room with the tiny paw of the desceased animal, claws extended, and began making scrapping motions as he too was laughing at poor Zach who now felt like a complete a total ass.


Zach punches Ice cold in the shoulder and yells, "You jerk , I hate you for this, besides, I, I knew it was you all along." "yeah right," replies rat, as he throws the paw at Zach, "you thought that Sparky had come back from the dead to get revenge and we had you scared silly." Ice Cold snickered, "you screamed like a little girl., even my little sister doesn't get scared that easily." Teh three friends all laugh for a few minutes about the prank they had just been a part of and Zach tells his friends, "well since your all here lets finish the movie  I was watching" Just then he rememebred the Tv had turned it self off. He looked over and said, "wait the tv is working for some reason never mind guys." Just then Ice Cold pulls the tv remote out of his back pocket and turns the Tv on with a smile on his face. "oh I see, ok, ok you really got me that was good guys."


So the three guys all sit down and watch tvand laugh about their practical joke for the rest of the night.



 
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« Reply #13 on: April 26, 2006, 04:26:04 PM »
>>>I sit there, and I carefully zip up my fly<<<


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« Reply #14 on: April 27, 2006, 06:06:48 AM »
OK I have to admit rat,  THAT story had me laughing my a** off.
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« Reply #15 on: April 27, 2006, 03:22:53 PM »
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I sit there, and I carefully zip up my fly.


OMG!!!!  I was playing with my Wii before anyone even knew what it was called!  
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