All you need there is to include that the cops will chase you just like in GTA! That would make the action a lot beter.
Now for my story....
On their way back still on the plane they run low on fuel and come crashing down to a desserted island thats the size of something as big as you can imagine. Then he sees Bowser hiding behind a tree. ( The island bowser got stranded on in SMS). Bowser attempts to snag peach once again but fails.
It then turns out that this means war!!! Mario and bowser start a wacky battle throwing coconuts at each other when the first of almost a 100 battles are faught the two enemies build their qwn bases. During the night Bowser the cheater sneaks into Mario's base and catches peach and takes her to his base.
Then when Mario and the little toad thingys wake up they all realize that shes gone. Now its up to Mario to rescue peach by going threw bowsers Powerful base and his unexpected round of all the classes of koopas and goombas. Then not mention Baby Bowser who was guarding the entrance......

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