One of the two games you have on your channel is Bayonetta so you're pretty cool in my eyes.
So i just checked out first part of that.
First, your intro. It has RAGE and angry face on it, so that automatically guarantees i won't watch any of your other videos, because i hate this ****.
As to actual video:
+ good voice, no screaming and stuff and overall calm and collected manner despite what you're trying to say in intro
+ you don't show your face and add retarded intermissions with bad acting
+ you know when to stay silent, though it would help to fill the silence a bit and give a bit of a context and backstory to what's happening. First cutscenes in this game are seriously too long and way too confusing, i am saying this a huge fan of this game.
- use Dodge, like seriously. Even just spamming RT would help immensely.
- torture attacks don't prompt randomly, they become available when you gather all the orbs under your healthbar, note that you get orbs by being good at a game and lose orbs when you get hit
- there is no point to collect Halos by destroying everything on a level, a kill at the end of a good combo will give you much more Halos in much less time
- bad framerate and screen tearing in some places but it's not a huge issue for a let's play, so whatever
Overall: not half bad, but need to be actually good at the game to keep my attention. You have a good attitude and that's a gigantic improvement over majority of Let's Plays out there. So, i guess good luck to you.