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General Chat / mouse_clicker's Short Story
« on: July 05, 2003, 08:10:13 AM »
Thanks for the ideas.... I drop references every 3 words because that's what Tolkien does (and it's a reason a lot of people never read the book). The trick to immersing someone in science fiction and fantasy is to completely surround them with their world. In science fiction you have new technologies EVERYWHERE and you don't explain any of them, because the people in the story take them for granted. You don't want people focusing on one or two specific things. With fantasy, it's all in the lore, and if you have ever read the Silmarillion, you'll find I reference actual events constantly- I don't make any of it up. People don't get pulled in when they think what they're reading is the only tale.
I know the beginning didn't start off with a bang, but I've always considered that cliche. Not that I don't want to grab the readers' attention, but I also don't want every single one of my stories to start off with some sort of fight or chase- Fellowship of the Ring didn't, and it's my favorite movie (although there's a bit of partiality to that
). I tried to draw in the reader with a sense of epicness, but my first paragraph has the most outward references and if you don't like the names as it is, I can understand how you wouldn't be drawn in.
I know the beginning didn't start off with a bang, but I've always considered that cliche. Not that I don't want to grab the readers' attention, but I also don't want every single one of my stories to start off with some sort of fight or chase- Fellowship of the Ring didn't, and it's my favorite movie (although there's a bit of partiality to that
