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Title: The Ten: It's on like Donkey Kong!
Post by: Evan_B on February 27, 2016, 05:59:53 PM
Well, I have too much free time on my hands. I guess it's time to make something weird.
(http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/GateGuard/NewComics/TheTen/PartOne/Promos/theten.gif)

The Ten:
If you thought that Nintendo made little sense before, we won't try to convince you otherwise. Meet the Ten, a group of fiercely loyal oddballs struggling to gain relevance in a multiverse of licensed properties. Will their adherence to tradition enable their survival? Can they rediscover the great truths of the past? Or will they have to forge a new way in order to keep up with the current era? No matter what each individual member chooses, they'll rarely agree, which might lead to hilarity, tragedy, or simply bizarre results.


Episode 1: Out with the Old
The Ten attempt a daring rescue from two odd goons. It goes pretty well, except one of them bashes Kid Icarus. Truly a monster.
Episode 2: Rules of Engagement
The Ten have to sneak by a group of scary mecha. Why is Lucina so on-edge?
Episode 3: It's A-Mii, Bro!
The Ten are being watched! Their observers decide to put them to the ultimate test- to see if they can resist the temptations of collectible figurines.
Episode 4: Obligatory Media Tie-In
The Ten find assistance from one of the many intellectual properties blessed with a video game adaptation. Also, where yo' curly mustache at?
Episode 5: The Daily Grind
Everyone has morning troubles.
Episode 6: It runs in the Family
The Ten encounter another ally to join the ranks- but he's less accountable then they would hope.
Episode 7: Don't Worry about the Future, it's alright
Backed into a corner, the Ten experience crushing defeat. Deus Ex Machina, activate!
Episode 8: The Hunter
Don't **** with Samus.
Episode 9: Nintendoom
Faced with irrelevance, the Ten bid a teary goodbye to one of their own.
Episode 10: The Ten
The epic finale!

-Page 1- (http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/GateGuard/NewComics/TheTen/PartOne/ep1a.jpg)
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Well, these first 600 views certainly haven't all been me, so I'm guessing people are interested. Stay tuned.
Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on February 28, 2016, 09:43:12 PM
(http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/GateGuard/NewComics/TheTen/PartOne/ep1c.jpg)
Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 01, 2016, 12:52:52 AM
If the constant updating is annoying, I'll start compiling the pages in the first post, maybe...? Eh, let's move on.
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 03, 2016, 02:06:29 AM
Yay, we have a forum comic.
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 04, 2016, 04:30:38 AM
I have insomnia
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 06, 2016, 10:55:17 PM
Start the working week off right with a heaping dose of The Ten.
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 08, 2016, 02:30:12 AM
Passive Aggressiveness
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 10, 2016, 02:15:16 AM
Join us next time for Episode 2: Rules of Engagement
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 14, 2016, 12:57:11 PM
PLOT
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 15, 2016, 02:43:14 AM
Hey, there's Link! Oh, and subtle plot.
(http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/GateGuard/NewComics/TheTen/PartOne/ep2b.jpg)
Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 21, 2016, 10:31:48 PM
It ain't over until I SAYS it's over.
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 23, 2016, 01:17:41 AM
Pit is a butt
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 23, 2016, 11:50:55 PM
The Ten Presents: Dynasty Warriors Gundam
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Khushrenada on March 24, 2016, 01:42:30 AM
I thought The Ten were supposed to take on Amiibo. What happened? You've changed, man!
Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 24, 2016, 12:51:50 PM
They will, I need to finish this expertly crafted deconstruction of Fire Emblem first.
Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 24, 2016, 11:15:06 PM
Take the hint, duuuude.
(http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/GateGuard/NewComics/TheTen/PartOne/ep2f.jpg)
(Also, updated with episode synopses for the first season. Likely the ONLY season, depends on how things go.)
Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 28, 2016, 12:52:06 AM
I'M SORRY I HAD TO DO IT.
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 30, 2016, 03:13:44 AM
I've been sick over the past few days.
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on March 30, 2016, 11:45:31 PM
Remember kids- if you think murder is a bonding ritual, you're wrong.
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on April 01, 2016, 03:10:01 AM
Nintendo is family friendly, folks.
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on April 04, 2016, 02:31:34 AM
The best part about waking up, is reading The Ten on weekdays.
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on April 05, 2016, 12:01:40 AM
Will YOU be the person that pushes us past 2000 views? Thanks for continuing to read!
(http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/GateGuard/NewComics/TheTen/PartOne/ep2l.jpg)
Oh and get ready for actioooooon
Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on April 06, 2016, 12:14:28 AM
Shhh. No words. Well, unless you consider "Hiiiya" a word.
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on April 07, 2016, 01:39:41 AM
Haha what's better than one page of action???
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TWO PAGES OF ACTION
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on April 08, 2016, 01:06:22 AM
Gee whiz, I wouldn't be crazy enough to do TWO double updates in a row, would I?!
(http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/GateGuard/NewComics/TheTen/PartOne/ep2p.jpg)

WHY YES, YES I WOULD BE CRAZY ENOUGH.
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Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: King of Twitch on April 08, 2016, 02:31:32 AM
I like this. It's like Toy Story Amiibo.
Title: Re: The Ten
Post by: Evan_B on April 11, 2016, 12:08:37 AM
Time to wrap this up!
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Title: Re: The Ten: "It's like Toy Story Amiibo"
Post by: Wah on April 11, 2016, 12:41:04 AM
You should do a proper web-series out of this, because I am really enjoying it.
Title: Re: The Ten: "It's like Toy Story Amiibo"
Post by: Evan_B on April 12, 2016, 02:31:50 AM
We'll be taking a short hiatus thanks to some important standardized testing. Join us next time for Episode 3: It's A-Mii, Bro!
(http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/GateGuard/NewComics/TheTen/PartOne/ep2s.jpg)
Title: Re: The Ten: "It's like Toy Story Amiibo"
Post by: Evan_B on April 14, 2016, 03:37:22 AM
This is gonna be at least twice as long as Episode 2, so strap in.
(http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/GateGuard/NewComics/TheTen/PartOne/ep3acopy.jpg)
Title: Re: The Ten: "It's like Toy Story Amiibo"
Post by: Evan_B on April 14, 2016, 11:01:32 PM
I'm gonna go play video games
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Title: Re: The Ten: "What is this PLOT in my NONSENSICAL WEBCOMIC?!"
Post by: Evan_B on April 17, 2016, 11:33:10 PM
We now return to your regularly scheduled The Ten.
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Title: Re: The Ten: "What is this PLOT in my NONSENSICAL WEBCOMIC?!"
Post by: Shaymin on April 18, 2016, 07:03:09 AM
If you ever go beyond comics, here's your theme song:
Title: Re: The Ten: "What is this PLOT in my NONSENSICAL WEBCOMIC?!"
Post by: Evan_B on April 18, 2016, 11:52:46 PM
It's a collectible, gosh Lucy

Also reaaaaaaaallly subtle plot
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Title: Re: The Ten: "Disregard females, acquire Amiibo"
Post by: Evan_B on April 20, 2016, 01:02:25 AM
Heeeeey everyone.

I'm having a lot of fun with this comic. But I don't think that it's proper to continue posting it on NWR for a number reasons. I also want to start reliably tracking pageviews for it and expand the audience, and I'm not certain that this is the right place for either of those things. It also doesn't feel right posting this here without really contributing to the actual site in some way. So, unless people actually want to continue discussing the comic in this thread, I'll be continuing to update The Ten on my blog, with an RSS feed and potentially a Tumblr page to follow. You can still check my signature for the date of the latest updates, as well.

Check out The Ten here (http://nerdraeg.blogspot.com/p/the-ten-webcomic-archive.html), where you can also scroll to find a whole archive of the comic. Thanks for reading!


Meh. One more, for shits and giggles.
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Title: Re: The Ten: "I DON'T DESERVE THIS IMAGE HOST"
Post by: Wah on April 20, 2016, 10:50:06 PM
Hey evan when this is finished will you realise this as a proper pdf file or something to download?
Title: Re: The Ten: "I DON'T DESERVE THIS IMAGE HOST"
Post by: Evan_B on April 21, 2016, 01:59:46 AM
Hey evan when this is finished will you realise this as a proper pdf file or something to download?
I'd consider it if there were a high enough demand. It would be nice to have the whole thing in one compendium.

There's a new comic, as well.
Title: Re: The Ten: There's nothing new to see here. But you can talk, if you'd like!
Post by: Evan_B on April 24, 2016, 08:32:25 PM
I'll just leave this here.
(http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/GateGuard/NewComics/TheTen/PartOne/Promos/theten4.jpg)
Title: Re: The Ten: More than JUST video game characters commenting on stupid trends.
Post by: Evan_B on May 17, 2016, 11:06:27 PM
So the Ten just recently passed through 50 pages, if you care (or not). If the rest of the series goes as planned, I foresee the final product rounding out at around 260-75 pages. So there's lots more work to be done!

I have a few archives, a tumblr and RSS feed, and the works... but I don't really get a lot of feedback. Anyone have any comments/critique they'd like to offer? That's all I'm looking for, moving forward from here.

Working on getting the PDF compilation started, as well!
Title: Re: The Ten: More than JUST video game characters commenting on stupid trends.
Post by: Wah on May 17, 2016, 11:07:24 PM
PDF yay!
Title: Re: The Ten: It's on like Donkey Kong!
Post by: Evan_B on December 05, 2016, 12:14:46 AM
Oops
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Title: Re: The Ten: It's on like Donkey Kong!
Post by: Evan_B on December 25, 2016, 02:10:44 AM

(http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/GateGuard/NewComics/TheTen/PartOne/ep6u.jpg)
So, The Ten has accumulated roughly 140 pages in the past year, and it's on the path to be completed before the end of 2017. I just wanted to ask for some feedback and/or critique from those of you who might have continued reading. Is there anything you like or dislike about the series so far? What would you like to see moving forward? There is a definite plot line, of course, but I would like to hear your considerations.